holcombe, schuyler ?

[schuyler holcombe]

~Profile~

schuyler holcombe

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Full Name:: schuyler marie holcombe

Age:: 17

Gender:: female

Occupation:: student

Sexuality:: heterosexual

Race:: human

Stance:: student
Years:: 17

Positive Traits::

never backs down
witty
likes challenges
cant fist-fight but will make you cry in a word-fight
always smiling
random and quirky


Negative Traits::
stubborn
hopeless romantic
want what she cant have
loud
*really* bad temper

Personal Likes::

cats
smiles
nailpolish
boys
uniforms
boys in unforms

Personal Dislikes::

fashion that clashes with her hair
fakers
goodie two-shoes
abuse
people who hate eachother for no good reason

Background Check::

Family Info::

Mother: Mary Holcombe nee Pan (dead)
Father: Tim Holcombe (alive/jail)
Aunt: Mitchi Frye nee Pan (alive)
Cousin: Mac Frye (alive)
Cousin: Morgan Frye(alive)
Cousin: Michigan Frye(alive)
Cousin: Marie Frye (alive)
Niece: Mitchi Frye, the second (alive)


Personal Tale::

At age one, Sky's mother died, of unknown causes believed to be natural though she was only 40. She didn't really know her much, but it impacted her, always asking where's mommy? to her father. maybe that's why he started drinking. when she was only three and a half, she was hit. hard. across the face. it got worse over the next year, and bruises were starting to show more prominent. her mothers sister, aunt mitchi, knew the signs and filed for custody. naturally she won. she grew up in a noisy house, filled to the brim with cousins and a niece, in contrast to only a father.

she liked school, being teased and teasing, having fun with random people, and general learning. her aunt was really protective, wanting her to have the greatest experiences of life after the year and a half of abuse from her father. sky hasn't heard from her father since, and really doesn't care much. she doesn't date, though she developed a slight crush. on who she's not telling.

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[Sariel Hunter]

I don't know if this application is finished or not (as you didn't place "NF" or "WIP" in the title to indicate that it wasn't finished) but you need to actually state what family members you may or may have, indicating whether they're alive or not, in the "Family Info" section.

Secondly, for your history, whilst you have taken an interesting approach of writing it out I would still prefer that you actually added more information to it. Perhaps write it our in a narrative manner, rather than write it so bluntly.

[Headmistress Osa]

Alright now that it's modified, btw I had to edit your profile layout myself since you tweaked it, please leave the profile layout how it is! Anyways this looks better!

ACCEPTED

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